WALT : use descriptive language
Our Teacher was reading us a book of Anzac violin it's very interesting. she let us do a chart of see, hear, location, temperature of our own story about the Anzac violin but we only did a start off in our writing.
What I've enjoyed : working on this piece of writing and coming up with different ideas
What I need to work on : is to add a bit more to the start off
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1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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