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Saturday 18 January 2020

SLJ act 1-3 taking the lead wk2 Day 1




I got Jacinda Ardern picture from wikipedia

I linked it in the slideshow

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  1. Unknown18 January 2020 at 12:28

    Kia Ora Sara!
    My name is Nadia, I'm a year 11 student from Hornby High, and I will be commenting on some of your posts for the rest of the SLJ 2020!
    Great on completing another epic post! You have done a great job of completing the tasks to the best of your ability. I can see all of the effort you have taken to create a post that is really eye catching.

    I particularly enjoyed looking at the things you enjoy doing. I also love the fact you included your own images, this makes the post more interesting to your readers. Great job on including where you got the Jacinda photo from.

    Next time, to improve your post, I suggest writing a small blurb at the start of your post, just explaining what the tasks where. This is so the readers can understand what the post was about. Some people might find it difficult to understand your post if you don't explain why you included what you included.

    Maybe you could also ask your readers a question, it might get you more comments. How have you been enjoying the SLJ?

    Keep up the great work Sara!
    I can't wait to read more of your posts!
    Until next time
    - Nadia :)

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  2. Unknown19 January 2020 at 13:49

    Hey Sara!

    It's me again - once again, you've published an amazing blog post, well done! I hope your holidays are going well :)

    This is a fantastic slideshow, Sara! I love the colours and the theme you've chosen, and you're letter to Jacinda is beautifully written, you are extremely literate for your age! Also, great job remembering to give credit to the website you got your picture from :)

    Wow, I play a few instruments too but I never learnt how to play drums - I've never gotten the chance, but I've always wanted to! That's so cool! I assume you're a big fan of music, do you have a favourite genre and musician?

    Do you think that in future posts you could write a quick sentence or two at the start of your post just to explain to viewers what the Summer Learning Journey is? It's just that some of your viewers who have come about your blog through things such as links might not know what too much about it - explaining it would be a big help!

    Fantastic work Sara, you continue to impress me with your posts and I can't wait to see what you do next. Have an awesome day, and I hope to hear from you soon :)

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    1. Anonymous14 February 2020 at 12:28

      Hi Natasha,
      Thank you for commenting on my slideshow. My favorite Musician s One direction because it puts me into playing the drum because their songs are amazing and sometimes it makes me cry, and expecially wit harry styles which he's my favorite too and have an amazing voices. I will next time write a start off with my work.
      Have a good day
      Sara

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