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Tuesday, 19 March 2019

Descriptive writing

In Room 6, we are learning about Descriptive writing. Our teacher asked us to pick a picture and we had to describe it.





It was was a nice day that we lived in that house all the garden around that the house was as dark as the forest that the flower around the house that made it colourful. The windows was colourful and it made me happy. I really like the white roof on top the house because it made it stand out with the picture. It look like people that go hunting lives in that house.
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  1. Anonymous7 June 2019 at 12:36

    Hi Sara,
    I really liked your story, it was so descriptive, like how you liked the white roof, and the forest was dark. My favourite part was when you said the bright windows made the main character happy. It was so interesting, but maybe next time add the full stops and comers. Have a good day!
    - Lauren

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