1.My favorite color is pink because it is a bright color.
2. My best friend is Kylie Ella Shelby Joria Fria and Denise and Mrs Lee.
3. My favorite programme is alvin and the chipmunks.
4. When i grow i want to be a chef and a doctor.
5. When i have a car i will have a red car with toyota.
6. When i go to the world i would like to go to vietnam.
7. I don't need to get married when i grow up.
8. I don’t want to have a children because i am worried that they are daughtry.
9. When i am the adult i will be 20 three.
Hello Sara. I love your work about Lucky Me!. You did well Sara and I liked it. Maybe next time you could check your spelling and your punctuation. But well done. :)
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ReplyDeleteHi Sara, I enjoyed reading your lucky me post. Maybe next time you could add capital I´s and maybe and commas when you are naming things, and you could write 23 or twenty three. Other then that I enjoyed it all.
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