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Friday, 6 March 2020

My writing

WALT : use descriptive language

Our Teacher was reading us a book of Anzac violin it's very interesting. she let us do a chart of see, hear, location, temperature of our own story about the Anzac violin but we only did a start off in our writing.


What I've enjoyed : working on this piece of writing and coming up with different ideas

What I need to work on : is to add a bit more to the start off

Thursday, 1 August 2019

Paragraph Writing

WALT : write a paragraph writing about this picture

A man Looks really dirty, scruffy and untidy. He is in the disgusting house that it looks like he is
poor as he sitting down in the damp house. He can’t go anywhere he is stuck in the damp
house, he doesn’t know what to do.
  
Sometimes, he can hear a creaky noise outside that made him feel scared because it is so dark
out there that you would never see anything as he would move along in the damp house.
He looks like he is sad because he was in the house feeling lonely, scared and nervous. 


As his tears slowly trickle down his face he can taste the salty tears. His nose is starting to drip
like a tap. He wipes his nose with his dirty arm. The house inside looks really poor and it would
smell disgusting like dirt and rubbish dump. 

I feel sorry for him because he is in a disgusting house and he is very dirty, scruffy and untidy
and he feels really lonely. The creaky noise makes him feel frightened and he doesn’t know
what it is. He is worried about scary people or animals coming to get him.

What I've enjoyed : is working on this writing because I like to do some descriptive words in
my Writing.

My next step : could be add a bit more to the writing so it could stand out but I've done a
great job.

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Description : Our Teacher let us write a Paragraph Writing about this picture and we have to use a lot of descriptive words in our writing.

Thursday, 9 May 2019

My Mother

WALT : write down the Character Description about your Mother

My mother looks like she comes from Vietnam, she has brown short hair, sometimes she wears glasses
and she is small, she cooks me breakfast, lunch, and dinner for me. She sounds like she is Vietnamese
and she teaches me how to speak Vietnamese. She smells like when she goes out with her friends she
smells like cherry blossom when she goes out. My mother is a very happy person and she likes me to
help her every day.


Sometimes my Mother wants to act she is a boss when she wants me to do something because she likes
to make me work fast like my chores. She speaks to me really friendly to me because she likes me to
help her when she is bored and tired. She likes to laugh when I tell her the joke because she likes jokes.


Sometimes I make my mother sad because some of my chores I didn't do make her upset. I will make her
happy by doing my chores every day so that she can be happy and take me out. My mum gets upset
with my grandparents because they are not kind to her but I told them to be kind to my Mother and when
my Mother comes they apologizes of what they did and they hug each other.


My mother is a very tidy Woman because she likes to clean the house, clean her car and tidy up her
bedroom because she likes to have more pace to do her work like cooking. She likes to tidy up the table
ready for Lunch or dinner. She likes to clean the TV because there is some mark on it and she likes to
tidy up the kitchen and she likes me to help her to do the kitchen because she thinks that i’m a very tidy
person.
Thank you for being a great mum I’m really enjoy living with you.

Description : Our teacher let us write a Character Description about your Mother for mothers day coming Sunday and each paragraph is a little bit different. Some of them are Physical, about behaviour, Reputation and environment and belongings.

Tuesday, 19 March 2019

Descriptive writing

In Room 6, we are learning about Descriptive writing. Our teacher asked us to pick a picture and we had to describe it.





It was was a nice day that we lived in that house all the garden around that the house was as dark as the forest that the flower around the house that made it colourful. The windows was colourful and it made me happy. I really like the white roof on top the house because it made it stand out with the picture. It look like people that go hunting lives in that house.

Thursday, 8 November 2018

Climbing Wall



WALT write a descriptive recount about Senior Camp


The climbing wall


When we hear our activities we were doing a climbing wall and I was surprised and when
we were at the climbing wall I was shaking and my hands were slippery because I haven’t
been on a climbing wall before.
When it was my turn of climbing the wall I start at number two when I climb up I was halfway
and I slip and you can float around and three people old the rope tightly backwards and told
them to stop and bring me down.


I was sitting down and waiting for my turn and I went on number one and I start climbing
and I reach to the top and I told them are you ready and I floated down and I was releaf



That is why I struggle with the climbing wall but when I kept on doing it I will get better
and better.

Thursday, 28 June 2018

Matariki


WALT : recreate a famous artist's painting, while incorporating New Zealand themes and celebrations.

We had to make a poem about Matariki while painting a picture